After the captain told me I was accepted, I asked what I should do next. I will show you around my beautiful ship lad, he said. You are standing on the beautiful Spanish galleon Medusa. This is the ship my father gifted me on his deathbed. We mainly transport goods trough the seven seas, but also sometimes escort merchants and other ranking people. Let me show you the inside, please follow me. after 2 hours or so we went trough the whole ship. What do you think, he asked. I think the ship is wonderful and big, I said. Yes, he laughed. She is a big lady, but pretty. I nodded in agreement. We will depart tomorrow when all goods are on board. So do what you have to do and get what you need, if you are not back in time we might have to leave you behind, the captain said. I thanked the captain and went to the local store.
I bought some shoes a dagger and a bag. The merchant said to me, I see you are going on an adventure, maybe I have something of interest to you. Somebody came by and sold me this map for a few copper coins. I read the map, but I can’t make anything out of it. You can have the map for 30 copper coins. That’s a lot of coin, I said. Tell you what, he replies, you get your supplies and this map for 60 copper coins. I jingle my small bag of coins and empty it on the counter. Seems you have only 48 copper sir, he says. I look at him and say, that’s all I got. Alright then, he says. What am i to do with this map anyway. I hand over the copper, and I receive my supplies and my map. While I put my stuff in the bag I thank the merchant and go outside.
I should tell my dad I am leaving, I thought. So I turned to the gate outside and asked the guards to open the gate for me. The gate opened and I walked trough. The guard outside of the gate asked how it went. I told them I was granted a spot on the Medusa. The two guards looked at each other in disbelief and told me I did a good job. We are to depart in two days, so I have to say my goodbye to my father. The guards nodded and waved me goodbye.
when i was walking to my home I saw someone eyeballing me. He walked towards me and asked if I had some food to spare. I told him I just gave all my money to the merchant for my supplies, but I offered him my old shoes, as he din’t wear any. He smiled at me and kindly accepted my old shoes and put them on, they fit his feet nicely. He thanked me and said to me, your kindness will one day be repaid. I bowed slightly to the man and walked on to my home.
When I was there I saw smoke coming from the chimney, and it smelled like food. I opened the front door and walked in. my dad looked at me and said smiling, I knew you would return. It smells good, I said to my dad. Would you like some carrot soup, he asked me while handing over the bowl of soup. I sat down and took the steaming bowl from my fathers hands. He took a bread from the basket on the table and broke a piece of, there you go, he said. He poured some soup in a bowl for himself and sat across me at the table. So, what happened he asked. I told my father what had happened today, and he listened to the things I had to tell while eating his soup.
After I told him everything, we both finished our bowls and put them aside. So the ship will be parting in two days, I said to my father. What great news, he said. You can finally take the first steps of making your dream come true. I nodded. How long will you be gone for, he asked. I don’t know I said, I haven’t asked the captain. Well, I hope it won’t be too long, my father said. I hope so too, I said. He stood up and picked up the bowls and put them away. Now you might want to rest a little for you have much energy to spend the upcoming weeks I suppose, my father said to me. He patted me on my shoulder and sat himself in his rocking chair. I went to my room and looked around for things I could bring with me on my journey. I din’t have much stuff, but I did have some copper coins and 2 silver coins in my drawer. I decided to take 1 silver coin and the 15 copper coins I had, and put them in my coin bag. You never know when you might need some copper or silver on the road. I laid myself on my bed with my arms behind my head and thought to myself what I could do while I was on the ship. I know I’d be working my bottom off, but i don’t mind working hard. That is what i have done all my life. That would be the easy part. I guess i could ask the captain if there was someone who could train me how to fight with a sword, I thought. I took off my shoes, rolled over and quickly fell asleep.
The next morning the sun greets me with a warm light in my face. As I open my eyes, I roll over to my side and sit up on the edge of the bed. My father is already doing stuff in the living room. It sounds like he is sweeping the floor. As I put on my shoes I walk out to the room where my father is. Good morning son, he says. Good morning father, I reply. Father, I have something to show you. What might that be, he asks. I say, yesterday I bought a map from the merchant in town, but he din’t know what it is for. That’s curious, my father replies. Let’s see it then. As I pull out the map from my bag and roll out the map on the table we see several items drawn and some sort of map. On the map it shows a dagger, a goat, a ship, some coins and fruits. There is also some kind of island drawn on the map, but it has no name. There is also a small X on the map. My father points to the x and asks me, what is that? I don’t know, I reply. It looks like a treasure map, my father says. Maybe these are the items that you need, to get whatever is there. or maybe that is what you can trade on that island. That is a very curious map my father says. I agree and let him look a little bit longer. I stand up and get some water from the jug, and put it in a cup to drink it. As I look at my father, looking at the map he suddenly puts up his finger and makes a movement which symbols I got to get closer.
As I look at the map where my father is pointing he says, doesn’t this look like a drawn entrance of something? Maybe a cave, I reply. Possibly, he says. Well, I hope you will find whatever this map will bring you, he says as he rolled up the map and gave it back to me. I will try to find whatever it is, and share my findings with you father. My father smiles and walks outside. The rest of the day I spend with my father caring for the horses. When suddenly my dad asks me, why did they say you were a slave master again? Because I handle a whip, and I din’t really get time to explain to them I am just a horse trainer, I answered. You better tell them as soon as possible, don’t hide anything from your captain son. I nod in agreement with my father. The evening falls, we eat and go to bed. The next morning it is just getting lighter outside. My father silently wakes me up and tells me not to get late. I put on my shoes and collect my things. As I am about to give my father a hug and say goodbye he stops me and hands me a small chest. He opens the chest and a nicely carved ring with a skull and red ruby eyes appears. I want you to take this with you my son, he says to me. Are you sure father? He nods and hands me the ring. I try it on my middle finger and it fits perfectly. See, it even fits you, he says with a happy tone. I thank my father for his kindness and give him a big hug. I’ll be back with the most spectacular stories father, I say. My father smiles and says, I can’t wait my boy. I grab my bag and walk trough the door. Waving my father goodbye I walk to the town gates.
I see your time to depart has arrived boy, one of the guards says as he opens the gate. Yes sir, I awnser. I thank the guards and walk to the bay. The Medusa is still moored in the distance, and I can see the captain on the shore with some of the crew members. As he sees me aproaching him he gets up and yells, it is time to depart lads! Come come he says, let’s start our adventure. We get in the boats and row towards the ship. As we get on board of the ship the cook points me to my hammock under the deck and the chest for my belongings. He hands me the key to the chest and walks off into the distance. I put my belongings in the chest and put the key on my belt. Slowly I try out my new hammock which is very wobbly at first, but after a few tries I sit in it very comfortably. All of a sudden I hear a loud scream from the upper deck saying, WE ARE DEPARTING! ALL HANDS ON DECK!
I am so enthralled in your story!!!
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That is realy kind of.you to say 🙂 i was also getting realy exite as to where the story is heading. Tell me if you have any suggestions you might want to read in the story if you have a feeling something is missing 🙂
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Your doing great. Just a few typo’s . I would love to hear where this is going. You have created a few different scenarios, where the story can go. The first adventures of him on a ship, The map and adventure finding the island…etc. I am really excited to see where the story goes.
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Me too. Haha im just opening some side stories i guess. Nothing wrong with a big adventure.
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Also my creativity is still burning
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That’s when it’s awesome…when your brain is in overdrive…at least for me. I’m working on 4 projects at once. I use my phone to record my ideas if there’s no paper.
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Good idea
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At night I sit outside on the swing with the doggies…so relaxed…so many ideas are popping into my head. I had to start recording them, I would forget by the time I went into the house to jot them down. Just easier for me. I am sitting on edge waiting for the next chapter….drink some strong coffee and start writing….haahhhhaaaa
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the third part is up
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On my way over!!!!!
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I’m heading over now
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Great!
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I love your story!!!!! But how come I have to wait so long for the next chapter??? hahaaa Your such a tease! I love that you created such awesome suspense! Thank you!
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Im very glad you like my story. I will try to make it about 2000 words long tomorrow 🤗 im sure i can do it. This part was about 1400 words long
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The battle….I didn’t know he was on a pirate ship. Did I miss that? The boy didn’t seem surprised. Have a great day, enjoy your writing! I can’t wait to see where your creative mind takes this story!!!!
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I have never mentioned what kind of ship it was. But looking at how the captain treats his crew he might be a bit too nice as a pirate, or maybe not?
“Find out in the next episode of, My life, chasing my seadream”
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Ohhh…stop it!!!! I’m your favorite reader hahaaa. Why did the boy get on a pirate ship? If not, why are they going to battle with the other ship?
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Because it is the ship on an enemy. The enemy could be anyone 😉
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Captains son?
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Maybe, maybe it will be just a merchant patting by with the dutch flag. Or maybe it is the target they set out to look for. Or maybe it is not the enemy and the captain just wants his crew to think it is the enemy. Maybe the captain seems nice but is actually greedy. And maybe he is a pirate. Or spy. You never know. Even i dont know haha
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Well, I’m sure you are going to intrigue your readers!
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I sure am trying my best for that 😀 haha
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Great job! Now get writing!!!!!
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New part is up. Its more them twice the words i normally use. See it as a double episode c:
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Oh your so sweet…did you do that because of all the request from fans?
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I guess so. It was tough tho
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Don’t rush on your story! Take your time, us readers can wait!
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Very bbusy with moving and all :p
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No worries…better not to rush. I feel I may have rushed you…if so I am sorry 😦 …
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No no not at all. I have just had some busy days. And there is at least 1 more day i am.very busy. But i realy love.the support. And i want you to.give me feedback. And i want you to rush me a little even tough you havent realy. Because i am not extreemly expirienced with planning i want to learn that. And this is a good way to start keeeping myself following deadlines, wich i never learned. So please, this is no ones fault. I am going to give you a story in maximum 3 hours. I dont care what it takes :p i love writing.
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I can see you do honey! I sent you a private email…Please read, and don’t be mad!
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Ok, hang on
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i sent you an email back 🙂
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Either way i dont like loose ends. So everything will be right eventually. I havent tought of them but the ideas come vividly as i write the stort. I just this a vague options to the story that work well and connect. Thats what makes a story awesome.
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You have my attention, that’s for sure!
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Thank you very much
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Your so welcome!
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Your such a tease!
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This is really beautifully crafted. I can’t wait to read more. 🙂
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Tomorrow ill write another part. C: im realy glad you liked it. You are fabulous ^^
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as are you, of course. 🙂 beautiful day to you. 💜
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Thank you 🤗 i wish you a merry christmass c:
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the third part is live
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sweet…be there in a few.
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alrighty
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Really interesting story!
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Thank you very much. I hope youll enjoy the rest of the parts im going to make for this story
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ANOTHER PART OF A YOUNG SEA DOG GEETING A DREAM’S DESIRE—!
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AVAST YE MATIE! You’re well on your way to writing glory—AT FLANK SPEED!!! 🙂
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I like it ^^ thanks a bunch for your support 🙂 i’d love it when more and more people read my stories 🤗 thanks!
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I live to pass out! 🙂
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